2009年6月27日 星期六

Comment for Group 5 PSA



Those pictures are good to put into the vedio. They puts lots of children who suffer abusing and the others are the innocent child who looks at us. It is very good to express the children feel. However, the narrator's emotion puts too much, so that I feel a little bit weird, and some words are pronouncing wrong. That needs to be improve. The sound and music is clear and good, but I think the voice is sort of loud. Besides, one of post is strange, because the child's shadow looks like ET. For the black sky and the lightning, it looks like ET. And the other post is not good enough, they puts a baby's photo, and the baby is smiling, which symbolizes a happy family. If the child uses an innocent eyes or begs us, it can show their emotion better.

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